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ETERNAL WORLD
ShinOri  [ ShinOri ]
Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam
AKROSS CON 2023
FINALIST
WINNER
Hi !, Im from Viet Nam. I made this AMV base on my vison of a world of creativity, color and hope. Most of us has been through a tough time these years so hope my AMV can bring a cheerful mood for all of us.
 05.01.2024  
Video    Various [ A Star So Close and Distant, Akanesasu Shoujo, Akebi's Sailor Uniform, Angel Beats!, ATRI-My Dear Moments, Attack on Titan, Before You Wake Up, Bloom Into You, Bubble, C3-Cube x Cursed x Curious, Celestial Method, Children of the Sea, Children Who Chase Lost Voices, Clannad, COLORsTOHO Animation, CRYSTAR, DIVE TO ZONe vol.10, Eureka Seven, Even The Endless Wind's Trajectory, From the New World, Gatchaman Crowds, Heikousen MV, Hello World, Honkai Impact 3, Hyouka, I Want To Eat Your Pancreas, Iroduku: The World in Colors,Jobless Reincarnation, Josee, the Tiger and the Fish, Kakegurui, Komi Can't Communicate, Link Click, Love Is War Love Song of a Certain Pilot, Love, Chunibyo & Other Delusions, Monogatari Series, Mottainai CM, My Happy Marriage, Orangestar-Surges, Oshi no Ko, Pretty Boy Detective Club, Psychic School Wars, Sing a Bit of Harmony, Spider-Man: Into the Spider-Verse, Spy x Family, SSSS.Gridman, Star Guardian MV, Summer Ghost, Suzume, The Anthem of the Heart, The Aquatope on White Sand, The Girl I Like Forgot Her Glasses, The Rolling Girls, Toaru Kagaku no Railgun, Tokino KOUSA, True Tears, TVC POCARI SWEAT, VERSEⁿ - Episode Song, Weathering with You, Wonder Egg Priority, YOKU - Eve MV, Your Name, Pink Valentine - Eve MV, Yuusei Boushi - Eve MV, Umi No Manimani - YOASOBI MV ]
Audio    The Midnight - Explorers
Genre    Dance
STANDARD VERSION
3:30 | 103 Mb. | 1920x1080 | H.264 / aac
ALTERNATIVE VERSION
3:30 | 240 Mb. | 1920x1080 | H.264 / aac
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Total comments: 22 « [1] 2 3 »
Unver  [ 28 January 2024, 13:40 ]
Красивая и красочная работа!
Очень приятное музыкальное сопровождение, поздравляю!
Nero_09  [ 23 January 2024, 04:50 ]
It was a very beautiful AMV!!
The editing skills were excellent, the colors were rich and the images were consistent.
Excellent work.
Shaoran  [ 23 January 2024, 03:54 ]
Качественно сделано, хороший подбор кадров
Alexei  [ 22 January 2024, 21:56 ]
Очень приятные эмоции после просмотра клипа. Сделано с душой :smile:
kuruta  [ 22 January 2024, 09:08 ]
I dont like this genre but this is the best video in the contest for me.
Anima Purgatorius  [ 21 January 2024, 12:49 ]
Этот клип, как и многие другие, построен на типичных визуальных образах: небо, солнце, цветы, честные глаза. Атмосфера впрочем хорошая, и настроение есть, и трек успешно расширяет визуальное пространство. Поэтому, при стандартных в общем-то решениях, видеоряд смотрится интересно.
okhostok  [ 16 January 2024, 05:40 ]
 ShinOri @ 16 January 2024, 07:21 
the audiences deserve something more than this

With that mindset, you will quickly lose your interest in AMVs. Do it for yourself, not for the audience. :)
The key to success is doing something that you will not regret when you look back. Even if it is something simple, do it until the end until there is nothing that disturbs you. It is actually harder to do flawless simple clip than effortful video with flaws. Because the former requires WILL, while the latter requires INTEREST. And the INTEREST quickly fades when you do not get attention that you expected.
AUTHOR
ShinOri  [ 16 January 2024, 05:21 ]
okhostok Thank man. I made this amv alone without any external help, I was exhausted but I enjoy making it. This amv this not perfect so I agree with all of your feedback, the audiences deserve something more than this. BTW thank you again for notice my Eternal Series

Added (after 20 min. and 27 sec.):

Cubito yeah! me too. I'm not a fan of putting credits in the video, I do it just because the rule said so :laugh:
Danny AMV  [ 15 January 2024, 23:07 ]
замечательная работа, мне понравилось :inlove:
okhostok  [ 15 January 2024, 17:24 ]
So, where should I start? This video was very nice, effortful, impactful, done in a right way.
- I liked how your scenes correspond to the lyrics.
- I liked how you edited the scenes with similar movements, so they will not look out of place.
- I liked how you composed scenes yourself so it matches the colors of the previous scenes.
- I liked length of the video. It is rare to see 3:00+ clips nowadays, as it requires immense effort to make consistent video with such dynamics in scenes.
- I liked positivity.

- I disliked masks like these:



The problem with that is too blurry edges and the wrapping lights are too short. Consider increasing wrapping lights (i.e. increase diffusion on LightWrap). Also in 1:36 the sphere's FPS does not match with the rest of the scene causing dissonance.
- I disliked lack of change. All of the timeline consists of dynamic moving characters with positive attitudes. On the slow part (in the middle of clip) you do not show any emotions, only neutrality. Personally it would have been better if it went to neutral -> sad -> happy.
- I disliked imprecise syncing in scenes like 1:07 - 1:10, 1:15 - 1:18, 1:22 - 1:24. You could have added some speed/scenes to calibrate.
- I disliked the text. Your video gives fairy vibes, but your text gives "official" vibes, in order to match your main video try using fonts more "fairier" and use less text. For example like this:



- I disliked usage of different drawings altogether. For example, at 2:27 the drawing is in one style, whereas 2:29 is in completely different cartoon style. In 2:48 - 2:49 - same story. I understand they are basically doing the same things, but it just does not look well.
- I disliked abrupt transitions. The hand at 2:32 does not link well with the hand at 2:33. I liked your thinking though.

All in all, it is a nice addition to your "Eternal" series. You are able to think out of the box and know what you are doing. Will look forward to see your videos more. Wish you the best.
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