 | [08.11.2024] AnimeFanaticBoy » Akira's way [telorsf] | | For this kind of music the video needs a lot of dynamics. I know the footage and while there are issues about the video loke ghost frames, the video improves near the end. But hey its not bad considering that it comes from a new editor |
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 | [05.11.2024] JawaProg » Няшествие 2013 [JawaProg] | Bean430, thanks for the criticism (although I didn't understand half of what you write :))
| you did a good job making sure the guitar fit the portion of the song |
Actually, I paid more attention to lip synchronization than to guitar and riff synchronization. It so happened that the guitarist in the original was already moving as if he was playing this song, which is what actually inspired me to make the video :)
Well, and the fact that the lead singer is a vampire, like the lyrical hero of the song :з |
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 | [05.11.2024] TakeshiAMV » It's Halloween [TakeshiAMV] | Leberate Thanks 
Bean430 Thanks a lot for your helpful feedback, I just think sometimes I don't need to follow the lyrics letter by letter, I preferred to focus on vibes and "metaphors", but I see what you mean. |
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 | [05.11.2024] Bean430 » It's Halloween [TakeshiAMV] | ok the beginning in the first half of the first verse perfection. granted even there (though it worked unlike elsewhere) it's suffers from not having a concepts decided. by the second verse there was not enough Halloween action type of scenes or a romantic build up to fit either anymore. some of the scene story is it not really flow with a few not even having transitions and missing direction not really going with the lyrics even. (I think you missed a really good opportunity for "fall with your knees" for this type of combo as getting that line right single-handedly could have helped tie both of those concepts together) I feel like if you mixed some other sources in it would have worked better particularly for verse 2.
re-watching this from the beginning of the second verse it becomes obvious that you just viewed the second for and forgot to combine it with the first verse. easy mistake you do not wanna watch the whole video each time but it is what it is. You did a decent job at the end. you are getting a decent score though from me. |
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| [05.11.2024] Bean430 » Няшествие 2013 [JawaProg] | | I do not mean this as a gag or sarcastic. did you actually look at the bottom 100 (and this is from someone who has at least 2 videos in the bottom 200, though I was not 'in my best state' at the time (particularly for 2020 which is why I repeated a concept) though I am better now) because this looks like a combination of things that the bottom 100 have from random band scenes, no scene changes and even though in sync (you did a good job making sure the guitar fit the portion of the song) not in beat when switching between the audience and the musicians. not good. |
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 | [05.11.2024] Leberate » Never [Rika Sudzuki] | | Если исключить все что не нравится, то мне нравится, люблю такое где сюжет хрен отследишь, но он с**а есть. 7.2 |
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