I wasn't sure I would participate in Akross this year because I had no idea what I was going to make nor did I have time. Then I remembered I had started this project awhile back and decided to finish it and submit it for this contest. I'm fairly content with how it came out. I really love this pairing; they are really cute. I wanted to kind of twist the story around(compared to the actual storyline and plot in the anime). I like organizing the clips a certain way to create different events taking place. I'm sorry I couldn't make something a little more interesting or unique. I just didn't have the time >_<
The concept of the video was pretty nice, i mean i really liked the story and the scenes you chose were pretty fitting, but i have to point out a few things that i didn't really like. First there were way too many flashes, in my opinion adding flashes is a nice idea but in a less amount, but i liked the colour of the flashes you added, nice touch. Then the pace of the video, in my opinion it needed to be more slow paced, too many cuts, some of them weren't really that needed, since the song is pretty slow paced as well, well maybe it's just me... Finally the story, hummm it wasn't really that clear, even though i really liked your idea. To sum up this video is pretty good, just a few things that could be improved that it is understandable since you didn't really have time, so i'll just give a 7. Nice job!!
Thank you for the cute love story. By the way, it's necessary to be not unique but delicate when you tell a love story. And your style is delicate. Nice.
First there were way too many flashes, in my opinion adding flashes is a nice idea but in a less amount, but i liked the colour of the flashes you added, nice touch.
Then the pace of the video, in my opinion it needed to be more slow paced, too many cuts, some of them weren't really that needed, since the song is pretty slow paced as well, well maybe it's just me...
Finally the story, hummm it wasn't really that clear, even though i really liked your idea.
To sum up this video is pretty good, just a few things that could be improved that it is understandable since you didn't really have time, so i'll just give a 7. Nice job!!