 | [17.01.2019] Kroner » Deus Ex Machina [Kroner] | | I would like to say something more about this vid. I know it has some problems behind it (sources, quality, for lots of you probably the music) but I'm asking you to look it with a different approach since my very first purpose was to match a movie with an amv. I'm not asking to change your evaluation method for this one ofc, just to change your point of view for a second and try to be involved by the plot. Hope story is both easy to follow, but still with something more to ask yourself, as I hope some voices I synthesized were good enough. As for the song I used it both cause I like it and cause the theme fitted really good for me, it could be more dynamic on some parts ( were I tried to compensate with sound effects), I Know this is a competition but i'm here because i want to share this with you guys, and I hope you will understand my purpose and you can enjoy the vid ^^ |
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 | [17.01.2019] Cane » Step Up [JadeCharm] | | Какие ж они страшные О_О В целом клип хоть и неплохой, но скучноватый... |
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 | [17.01.2019] Anejo » Deus Ex Machina [Kroner] | | okhostok @ 17 January 2019, 14:17 | | Anyways, good luck. You did a very original video that the concept may become popular in future. |
да пытались тут у нас уже некотоыре русские команды нечто подобное реализовать. И тоже на киберпанк. Но там, честно признаться, сюжет казался несколько запутанным (детектив какой-то) что без описания втянутся в просмотр было трудно.
Первое такое видео, которое смотрелось цельно, без напряга.
Хотя не отрицаю, в чем-то можно было улучшить вовлеченность)
Если подходить к жанру краткометражки с умом могут появится интересные и сильные работы, отходящие от привычных канонов AMV |
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| [17.01.2019] Anejo » Love Creation [Kawai ishi] | Красивый клип. И прогресс у автора есть, хотя клип на микскон все-таки понравился чуточку больше.
Мне показалось, что мелодия и вокал в начале просили буквально, чтобы планы-кадры задерживались чуточку побольше.
А от зумов в большинстве мест, где они были можно было отказаться, приберегая их для дабстепа, так обыгрыш получился бы более логичным.
И не совсем удачно когда камера делает наезд и почти сразу же отъезд, если без нее никак. то в идеале продумать раскадровку, где бы сначала преобладало движение в каком-то одном направлении, хотя бы по три плана, но выдерживать.
Но это не помешало почувствовать атмосферу песни, которую автору удалось передать. И неординарные герои мне тоже пришлись по душе |
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 | [17.01.2019] okhostok » Deus Ex Machina [Kroner] | Wow, 11 minutes. This is a great idea that requires a lot of effort.
However, there is nothing that holds viewer's attention in the beginning except cool effects. Beginning is very detailed. This is bad.
Anyways, good luck. You did a very original video that the concept may become popular in future.  |
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| [17.01.2019] Anejo » Deus Ex Machina [Kroner] | I remember some attempts earlier to make such short films, but this one impressed me, it has clear concept and accurate execution.
Sometimes authors has muxh to say, but they are limited by timing of the song.
As I think, the video tends to be boring when it has unsutable pacing and timing of culmination, rather than the absolute timing itself.
Thus I do not think the story is too long, anyway)
I do enjoy the story and yes, I think it was worth seeing)
Nothing to add on the technics part. I like the style (colours, effects, edit
As for my vision, I would probably change the audio (you know)) to suit action part (escaping of replicant-girl).
And, on the one hand, commom looks are important to make sources work together, but on the other hand some change in colours and atmo would be better in terms of such long video, it would make it more involving |
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| [17.01.2019] okhostok » Love Creation [Kawai ishi] | Так много эффектов и эффорта. И так красиво.
Но, переходы выглядит резко. Повествование смутно. Концовка резко и плохо. Эффекты не дал мне проникнуть в историю.
Удачи автору. |
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 | [17.01.2019] HonyxOtaku » Deus Ex Machina [Kroner] | | sorry xD but i really like the band but i never would use the band with this drawing style(from anime manga) i think it is a really good idea what you say with the amv and what you do with the anime was much work ! but it is for me this year by so much amvs..at akross that i think much used a song what dont fit the anime ..i dont know why sorry it is only my feeling. (the text fits with the anime but not the sound from the music with the drawing) but anyway nice work :) i like it ..and wow long amv - nice one :D hope you understand my bad english xD |
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 | [17.01.2019] Radical Dream » Our Fate [Radical Dreamer] | | MesoGear @ 16 January 2019, 18:58 | | Кстати название хоть написал бы, конечно если я вдруг его где не проглядел. |
The Last Sighs Of The Wind - Your Wave Caresses Me
The Last Sighs Of The Wind - Euphoria
сори, я забыл) |
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 | [17.01.2019] Bean430 » Our Fate [Radical Dreamer] | | perfect, except the credits at the end should be separate and the final beet of the song is missing.Still rated the video a 10. |
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