It is my first time at akross and I hope, you know, I will get some cookies with this. :D I tried to make my own story out of what the anime had given me and even though the anime did not really make it easy for me at some parts, I think it worked out well in the end. Hope you enjoy!
der edit war ok. ich fand gut, dass du nicht wie viele anfänger versucht hast mit vielen effekten zu arbeiten sondern dich auf das wesentliche konzentriert hast nämlich sync zur musik. anders als viele andere habe ich die story verstanden (liegt aber vielleicht auch daran, dass ich den anime gesehen hab) die du dir ausgedacht hast. im großen und ganzen ein durchschnittliches ordentliches video. 7.0
You changed the scenes with zoom, cut in, quick mask. It is bad to depend on those techniques too much. Rather than those it is important how you combine these that are close up shot, middle shot and long shot. Anyway I enjoyed your amv.
Didn't really feel the story or knew where you was going with this so much. Video was alright though.. Didnt think the song really fit the anime. but it was interesting to watch.