It is my first time at akross and I hope, you know, I will get some cookies with this. :D I tried to make my own story out of what the anime had given me and even though the anime did not really make it easy for me at some parts, I think it worked out well in the end. Hope you enjoy!
The story you made up was nice and I liked how you played around with some of the scenes. The ending could have been better but overall it's pretty amazing! *gives you the said cookies* good luck in the contest as well :3
Not bad, liked it, but it didn't really capture my attention. As said goRz, some parts were good and some parts could have been better, also I think the song didn't fit the anime/story. Despite that, was kinda good
TAKE YOUR COOKIE :B