 | [17.12.2016] maple leaf » Lune [King Redeem] | Sensitively told and beautifully crafted, though I find the story to be a little bit confusing.
I would say that this is quite curative to watch. Besides, the scene matches the song well and I like your style a lot. Definitely one of my favourite in this year's contest entry.
Good luck.
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 | [17.12.2016] Kvant » Goodbye [kawaimi-chan] | Возможно Я плохо уяснил себе задумку, недопонял чего, но ч/б эффект на основную часть клипа смотрится сильно сомнительно. Возможно имело смысл как раз цветные вступление и послесловие делать ч\б, а основную часть, (ведь именно в ней должен был раскрываться "эмоционал" (?)) показать в цвете. А появление цвета на 02.00 стоило превратить в его затухание более растянутое по времени и включающее в себя кадры 01.44 и 01.49.
История какая-то слишком условная, не хватает ярких деталей, красивых элементов, наполненности. М. б. даже более откровенного показа чувств, если конечно "накал страстей" подразумевался.
Романтика или, тем более, драма не очень чувствуется. Кажется автор здесь делал ставку на м/в, и кажется не смог его реализовать. Хотя, возможно, кому м/в "зашло" тот прочувствовал. |
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 | [17.12.2016] MrNosec » Goodbye [kawaimi-chan] | Most of the masks were quite rough, in some instances the mask moves when there is a repeated frame and stays still when the character actually moves, also the absence of feathering which creates that lack anti aliasing or "pixel staircase" effect, it just pulls me out of it.
I downloaded the Alternative version and I couldn't help but notice some heavy color banding (specially on very contrasted black and white scenes), also it appears to have been encoded/rendered in 25fps with resampling enabled, when the anime was most likely 23,976fps and you do that, this happens throughout the entire video 
Now, this might have sounded like nitpicking, probably because it was, but I personally hate stuff like that, just tiny details you might consider fixing in your next projects.
I could try and talk about the actual video, but I couldn't relate or feel invested in it at all, maybe I was waiting for a climatic moment to give meaning to it all, can't really blame the video in this aspect though, it's most likely because it's simply not my type.
Best of luck nonetheless! |
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 | [17.12.2016] NIGHT » Goodbye [kawaimi-chan] | Автор, ты сколько раз этот клип перекодировывала?
Видеоряд весь в артефактах.
00:03 - маска слева смотрится чужеродно, неужели не видно?
Врезанные титры не нужны.
01:36 - никогда не делай стоп-кадров с такими пугающими лицами
Полностью черно-белое изображение всегда смотрится хуже чем двутонное или изображение с сильно "убранной" цветностью.
Клип из разряда "начинающих": проблемы с кодированием, в монтаже очевидные мелкие огрехи, сюжет есть но слишком слабый/однообразный.
Из плюсов... ну наверно некоторая оригинальность, задатки работы с масками и то что автор может правильно совмещать видеоряд с музыкой. |
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 | [16.12.2016] PieandBeer » Divided Souls [Tribel] | | this video is so shiny and clean +AAA+ for me there is a sort of mood disconnect between the song and anime (like the drink too much part and the singer's accent in general) but that's just a preference thing on my part. this video is well done and the story differently comes through. i'm excited to see what you make next :) great job |
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| [16.12.2016] PieandBeer » Fishes [IGNOTUM] | | i liked this, i felt like for the sort of atmosphere you were trying to present, a few clips were switched off a bit too fast and it could have benefited from some added motion just to keep it from feeling stiff. I did not really understand the actual story of the characters, but the scenery definitely allowed me to understand the mood. i applaud you for doing something different, especially compared to the fast, effect filled videos in this contest.this video definitely kinda transported me to a different time and place yo nice job :) |
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| [16.12.2016] PieandBeer » Goodbye [kawaimi-chan] | | I liked the story the relationship development. the black and white worked for me. there were a few spots where the characters did not quite match the background and a few bits where it just felt like shots of girls looking at each other, but most of it was pretty solid for me. I loved the ending too +A+ |
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| [16.12.2016] maple leaf » Divided Souls [Tribel] | The color contrast seem to be a bit much on the beginning and some scene's exposure was quite blown out, especially when you watch it in fullscreen,1080p.
Nonetheless, editing is solid. I like this AMV a lot and I hope you will make it into final.  Good job. |
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| [16.12.2016] maple leaf » Goodbye [kawaimi-chan] | Editing and story composition are quite good, but I don't like the black & white style though, I kept on waiting for the climax moment, which I expect the scene will switch back from grayscale into full color, but it never came until the very last moment.
Anyways, I enjoyed your work.
Good luck in the contest.
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 | [16.12.2016] Cane » Invisible Embrace [DarkCat] | | Обилие хлопортов(особенно в начале) несколько подпортило впечатление, в остальном средненький клип... |
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