 | [29.11.2014] AnimeFanaticBoy » Open Doors [moopet] | For a crossover, it was so-so.
You will have to improve the masking technique, I could easily notice the out borders. You have the idea, it seems you also know what you're doing but the tecnical aspect makes it loses some points. Remember that one day you'll not be able to explain everyone your story: The video must talk for itself, not you.
I can see the intention but yeah, lot of work to do. Good luck buddy |
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 | [29.11.2014] InsanitySupporter » Crawling [OnyxAMVs] | This series doesn't stand for an action video.
The barcode thingy wasn't bad, I think it was needed to be displayed in another way, the other font you used wasn't that matching for the video.
Also, I think you need to work on syncand scenes selection in order to create atmosphere and momentum. |
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| [29.11.2014] InsanitySupporter » Unbound [Ryuu-Dono] | I liked, the atmosphere, the story, the effects, the series, the color, the song, everything!
Kinda strange it didn't make me get wet, it was soooo coooool. |
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| [29.11.2014] InsanitySupporter » Open Doors [moopet] | First of all, I need to says that I can sense the effort on doing this.
Your story and the series that you used are something unique, I doesn't have a story with a couple that breaks up/one of the couple dies/one of the couple cheats/time-travelling romantic encounters.
I think you need to improve some technical aspects, I see some lipflaps and some maskings aren't that clean.
The coloring effect that you used is somewhat strange but I liked it.
If you're making a story video it's better if you don't have to explain the story in the description, the video has to tell it by itself.
I think the song fits your concept very well.
Overall, good job. Keep improving, I bet you'll make something really great next year. |
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 | [29.11.2014] IGamerEditorAMV » Forever to the end [IGamerEditorAMV] | AnimeFanaticBoy
Pero en mi caso, mis palabras no tenian ni ofensa y tenian fundamento, tu eres un editor bastante malo respecto al nivel de los demas (no quiero ofender, yo tambien edito mal en comparacion con muchisimos otros) pero tu lo has puesto por poner, cuando cojas nivel superior al mio, te dejare que me saques fallos todo lo que quieras y de hecho agradezco los fallos porque asi siempre podre mejorar 
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Kaien
 Can you tell me the reason? I'm not good but I want improve, if you tell me my failures maybe I can make it better in a near future (:
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moopet
Jajajaja lo has clavado xDDD Es mi primer concurso y no sabia muy bien como llevar esto, hasta dia de hoy siempre habia editado AMVs de accion y cosas para pasar el tiempo, ya que me presento por ponerme alguna meta y de tritio he visto algun video suyo (creo que reciente) y me da igual el tiempo que lleve alguien si su recorrido ha sido nefasto, conozco a gente que lleva menos y tiene mejor tectina pero le respondi de malas formas pensando que iba a ofender pero tenia sus motivos, supongo que en parte me lo merezco XDD Soy malo al expresarme por escrito |
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| [29.11.2014] InsanitySupporter » Forever to the end [IGamerEditorAMV] | Aquí Joskua, reportándose.
Desde el momento en que vi tu fuente y canción tuve un mal presentimiento, y al ver cómo presentaste la canción, sabía cómo iría esto...
Una canción así requiere una fuente que tenga un mayor peso emocional, no se transmite todo el sentimiento que podrías, sin mencionar que se mira muy random.
Me pareció el típico video de acción + drama que se sube en el primer concurso, tu técnica no es mala pero hay que pulirla, y hay que trabajar mucho en el aspecto creativo.
Por cierto, no deberías ponerte al tiro con Tritio, ha sido pro desde antes de que muchos de los pros actuales tocaran el sony vegas... |
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 | [29.11.2014] moopet » Forever to the end [IGamerEditorAMV] | | I love the flow in this video. In my opinion, Raw Effects were the best choice for the song and overall message the video represents. Best of luck! |
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| [29.11.2014] moopet » Open Doors [moopet] | I thank you all for your critiques. The best way to learn is by the mistakes you make so compliments to you all.
This is my first time entering an AMV contest, so the process is still new to me. If anyone has any advice they would like to offer, please don't hesitate. |
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 | [28.11.2014] Эль-тян » Open Doors [moopet] | Вот что бывает когда автор зажимает битрейта на превью... приходится смотреть квадратики... И этот глупый пересвет в центре экрана тоже полный отстой.
Ну и жалко столько эффорта в топку пошло |
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