 | [15.01.2024] NIGHT » Cemra [MikuriAki] | Чисто технически (музыка/видеоряд) все достаточно симпатично и ровно.
Однако, хоть я и не понимаю на слух белорусский, но сложилось четкое впечатление что в клипе - акын. |
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| [15.01.2024] NIGHT » Dukkha: Melancholy of Sansara [Anima Purgatorius] | Кхм... уважаемый автор...
Начало клипа (сюжет) я какбэ понял, но подача оставила недоумение.
На моменте с танцем (01.23+) кроме просто музыки - на заднем плане звучат невнятные вопли, создающие сильный диссонанс 
Дальше пошло вообще что-то "левое"... какие-то драки опять же не совпадающие с музыкой... и два каких-то парня машущие мечами как зубочистками...
А дальше я мучаться не стал.
Итог по клипу: судя по всему, вам просто скучно и есть много свободного времени. |
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 | [15.01.2024] okhostok » Eternal World [ShinOri] | So, where should I start? This video was very nice, effortful, impactful, done in a right way.
- I liked how your scenes correspond to the lyrics.
- I liked how you edited the scenes with similar movements, so they will not look out of place.
- I liked how you composed scenes yourself so it matches the colors of the previous scenes.
- I liked length of the video. It is rare to see 3:00+ clips nowadays, as it requires immense effort to make consistent video with such dynamics in scenes.
- I liked positivity.
- I disliked masks like these:
 
The problem with that is too blurry edges and the wrapping lights are too short. Consider increasing wrapping lights (i.e. increase diffusion on LightWrap). Also in 1:36 the sphere's FPS does not match with the rest of the scene causing dissonance.
- I disliked lack of change. All of the timeline consists of dynamic moving characters with positive attitudes. On the slow part (in the middle of clip) you do not show any emotions, only neutrality. Personally it would have been better if it went to neutral -> sad -> happy.
- I disliked imprecise syncing in scenes like 1:07 - 1:10, 1:15 - 1:18, 1:22 - 1:24. You could have added some speed/scenes to calibrate.
- I disliked the text. Your video gives fairy vibes, but your text gives "official" vibes, in order to match your main video try using fonts more "fairier" and use less text. For example like this:
- I disliked usage of different drawings altogether. For example, at 2:27 the drawing is in one style, whereas 2:29 is in completely different cartoon style. In 2:48 - 2:49 - same story. I understand they are basically doing the same things, but it just does not look well.
- I disliked abrupt transitions. The hand at 2:32 does not link well with the hand at 2:33. I liked your thinking though.
All in all, it is a nice addition to your "Eternal" series. You are able to think out of the box and know what you are doing. Will look forward to see your videos more. Wish you the best. |
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