Editing was really nice and cheery and fit the mood of the song ^^ It felt like an OP of sorts. I think at times you focused a bit too much on text (f.e. the japanese bit) without any characters, and generally there were too many close-ups. Try to change the range of different clips a bit more, especially if it's the same person. On the other hand for the text, if you use too many different fonts, it sometimes looks a bit sloppy, so i'd stick to max 3-4 fonts that work well together. That's my own opinion, though ^^ Anyway, great work!
Anyway, clip was very good. It has a charming mood