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Various [ Nerawareta Gakuen, Hyouka, The Garden of Words, Ef - the latter tale, Chuunibyou demo Koi ga Shitai! Ren ] |
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| AVERAGE SCORE: | 5.9 / 10 | | 55 | | RATING POSITION: | 2187 / 2996 |
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| VIEWERS: | 5.8 (58) | CRITICS: | 6.3 (23) | | EDITORS: | 5.8 (28) | EXPERTS: | 5.0 (1) |
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Also, sometimes the scenes didn't merged that well.
Your story-telling isn't bad, I think you can do it better, but is ok.
I'm sure you can make a masterpiece. this was good for a first try in a hard genre.
Keep working, I want to see your next piece.
However I felt that you had done your best. It's most important. Good luck!
-Consider the animation: Without watching the Making Of I could easily notice every change in the video when the success of a crossover is to make these changes at least unnoticeable for the viewers.
-The scene selection: at some points it feels like you were just mixing the scenes from the separate shows in order to develop the story, but there wasn't an element that could connect both plots. Like if there were two different plots
-The technique. it's so-so the one you used, but not bad, it didnt affect the development of the video
Ушла отсюда.