Oh, another hard choice. Had to rewatch it several times straight. A formidable entry indeed. Too bad, you failed the ending part, just like so many others before you sigh. Anyway, thanks for the in-depth delve into the major's brain.
Pretty nice! I think you did a good job in the scene selection, you used them nicely for transitions and they looked pretty good in terms of quality. The song blended it quite nicely, although it felt a bit off sometimes. The syncrho was also pretty good, but sometimes the pace of the song asked for a different kind of transition or type of scene. An 8/10 overall and a good luck for you!
good luck!
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З.Ы. Это новые Госты, что ли? Что же они сделали с Мотоко