you've just started? Dude, you've got potential. Like AnimeFanaticBoy said, you've got a few areas you can improve in, but that just comes with time. Good luck with the competition!
» AiaSnTropeaS Thanks well it hasn`t been too long since i started editing an wanted to look what others think of my editing and wanted to get tips to what i could do better next time so i try to do better with the story and the transitions i still have much too learn
THIS could have a lot of potential!!! your idea is really nice but the video itself is... Your transitions are waaaaaaaaaay too strong, stealing attention from the video, and the story you wanted to create... I didn't get it almost at all, it was too fast! your source anime and the scenes you used are pretty good, whats off is just your editing. sync is good, transitions bad, story really hard to notice (except from the end). You got good eye, keep up and good luck. 5.5/10
Transitions effect are a bit too random and those 'wipe from left and right' standard transitions are hard to watch, please avoid them like plague in future unless you know what you're doing.
Thank you i try my best
Thanks well it hasn`t been too long since i started editing an wanted to look what others think of my editing and wanted to get tips to what i could do better next time so i try to do better with the story and the transitions