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TRAGIC VAMPIRE STORY
ingrid97  (shaft)  [ ingrid97 ]
Caaguazú, Paraguay
AKROSS CON 2016
this is my first amv thah i made. and i hope you like it :)

Oddities are the world itself. they're linked to the world, unlike living beings. science alone cannot shed light upon them, as there will always be people who'll be afraid of vampires. although all forms of darkness could be lit up, darkness will never cease to exist.
 15.01.2017  
Video    Monogatari Series
Audio    Stephen Swartz - Bullet Train (feat. Joni Fatora)
Genre    Action, Story, Thriller
STANDARD VERSION
4:16 | 79,4 Mb. | 1280x720 | H.264 / aac
PREVIEW VERSION (LOW-Q)
4:16 | 12,1 Mb. | 480x272 | H.264 / aac
ALTERNATIVE VERSION
4:16 | 79,7 Mb. | 1280x720 | H.264 / aac | 60 fps
  
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Total comments: 15 « 1 [2] »
777lexa777  [ 15 January 2017, 13:06 ]
ничего интересного в итоге
Kvant  [ 15 January 2017, 11:58 ]
Прочитав название клипа Я уж была понадеялся увидеть что-то крайне интересное... увы... разочарован. Вполне рядовой амв клип, пусть и с проблесками довольно мощной, интересной эстетики (увы, совсем не сосредоточенной на "вампирском" вопросе, да и пожалуй вообще ни на чём не сосредоточенной). А между этими проблесками длиннющие куски "совсем не о чём", которые совершенно не несут на себе реализацию "цельности произведения", развитие или обыгрыш каких-нибудь эстетических, смысловых ньансов или сюжетных (указан жанр стори) ходов, а нужны только затем "что бы музычку обыграть". В этом плане можно назвать клип затянутым. Подсократить его бы в половину, выкинув лишний мусор, имхо, было бы лучше.
Q55555  [ 15 January 2017, 07:22 ]
AnimeFanaticBoy  [ 15 January 2017, 06:11 ]
Repasemos las bases:

En un primer lugar, la seleccion de escenas no encaja. Pero se ve que hay una intencion y no como una obra desordenada. Los efectos hay que planearlos mejor para la proxima.

A proposito, hay una comunidad para editores latinoamericanos llamada ZonaAMV por si quieres mejorar
MrNosec  [ 15 January 2017, 05:42 ]
It's not bad for your first try, but it seems like you tried to do more flashy stuff rather than getting the basics down first tho.

The scene selection feels very unplanned and doesn't fit the music from my perspective, some internal sync is cool, like Ararararagi hitting the wall @ 2:26
The vertical-glitchy-effect-thingy just didn't work for me, it's not synced to any specific sound and it appears randomly throughout the whole video (it doesn't look all that good either), this is an example where having no effects would have actually made the video better, the zoom transitions were an OK idea, but should be used sparingly and when the scenes in between justify it.
The encoding also has some issues, it's 60fps with no interpolation which means it has alot more repeated frames (making it look more stuttery) and more than double the file size it should have, bitrate is 2Mbps, quite terrible, specially for a vid encoded at 60fps, and other mundane stuff like only having 1 ReFrame and so on.

You were not supposed to know all this of course, you're just starting out, and maybe you don't even give a shit :biggrin: and that's fine too, but I left my fussy and pedantic fault-finding opinion anyway so you can do more and better on your next projects, good luck with those!
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