Hey, I'm Coach. Enjoy the video and stuff. Thank you to alice2k for if not for you Akross may have not happened this year. The story is simple it, if you've seen zetsuen no tempest you'll know I merely altered the story slightly to change who feels what and who's present for some events. Most of the other video sources were used only for the butterflies from other anime. Anyway rate it, like it, dislike it but my only hope is someone enjoys it; peace. Oh and Murry Chrismusss
The beginning part of the transition makes me bad,there have some blur transitions u can change with the light material,and after the 01:15 u should pick the more strong scene cuz the beats is rly strong,but not a bad video good luck man
English was easy to understand :) thank you for the criticism and I will work harder to make something more consistent in the future any other thoughts or advice?
the first 15 seconds of the clip from 30 seconds of the beginning - you took the preset ENVATO, but could't use it normally. if you look closely, you can see twins. at 20 seconds, can be seen as the left of the screen disappears superimposed footage. for youtube is the norm, but for the competition over this it was necessary to spend more time. my english bad. sorry))
I'd like to add what my story was here for anyone who may wonder Since it's my first time creating an AMV for a big contest after having been editing for 9 months now just in case the story doesn't come through clearly. - Sincerely it was born from the quote by Shakespeare "Time is out of joint" I decided to use that as the base with this show because it's often quoted through out it.. What I chose to do was make a story of two heroes that never actually become heroes. Two boys embark on a journey filled with rage from the loss of the girl they both loved as the world around them is crumbling in destruction. The two knowing it's not what the one they loved would want to see are unable to cope with her death and mourn properly. When the main character finally has a moment of revelation about how deep in the pit they've both gone together on their path of self gratifying vengeance it's far to late and rather than living up to what they were supposed to be and saving the world they end up losing their lives having done nothing but fill an already terror filled world with only more fuel to ride it's way towards ending.
English was easy to understand :) thank you for the criticism and I will work harder to make something more consistent in the future any other thoughts or advice?
for youtube is the norm, but for the competition over this it was necessary to spend more time.
my english bad. sorry))
Do you feel it should have overall been toned down some or is it at particular points for you?
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Sincerely it was born from the quote by Shakespeare "Time is out of joint" I decided to use that as the base with this show because it's often quoted through out it.. What I chose to do was make a story of two heroes that never actually become heroes. Two boys embark on a journey filled with rage from the loss of the girl they both loved as the world around them is crumbling in destruction. The two knowing it's not what the one they loved would want to see are unable to cope with her death and mourn properly. When the main character finally has a moment of revelation about how deep in the pit they've both gone together on their path of self gratifying vengeance it's far to late and rather than living up to what they were supposed to be and saving the world they end up losing their lives having done nothing but fill an already terror filled world with only more fuel to ride it's way towards ending.