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DEUS EX MACHINA
Kroner  [ Kroner ]
    
AKROSS CON 2018
FINALIST
WINNER
Location:Rome, Italy
Studio:Rising Production
Video: Various [ Exaella, The Animatrix, Blade Runner: Black Out 2022, Ergo Proxy, Genius Party Beyond ]
Audio: 30 Seconds to Mars - Hurricane
Genre: Story, Psychedelic, Drama
Length: 11:21
Premiered:17.01.2019
Added: 11.01.2019
Viewed: 7691
Author's Commentary
Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before.
(Edgar Allan Poe)

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Viewers Comments (total: 51)
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  Fynjy (17 January 2019, 15:51)       
Быстро одиннадцать минут пролетели, было интересно и в целом здорово. Подумаю, еще над оценкой, не исключаю что будет близко к 10, а возможно и десятка авансом. Атмосфера, многоточия, смысл, в сторону недостатков даже смотреть не хочется, так выпирают достоинства.
  Kroner (17 January 2019, 15:37)     
» Axiles
that's exactly the reaction i wanted xD
still sorry for 11 min
  OscarAMV (17 January 2019, 15:31)     
Bravo Carlo, aspettavo di vederlo da un po', idea molto originale, molto buono il montaggio e anche le varie sfumature del video, peccato alcune clip di bassa qualità, overall 9,5 :smile:
Dai che tra poco avrai anche tu il voto diviso in 4 sull'akross :lol:
They cannot stop us, they cannot stop the future! :cool:
  maple leaf (17 January 2019, 15:29)     
I got mixed feeling about this, one part I like the story, selection of music and editing part, plus it's a refreshing concept to construct drama in this way. Prologue seem to be a bit slow and in my opinion, it perhaps can be trimmed to match more to the norm of traditional AMV, although everything starting from 2m09s seem to click with me.

I enjoyed this a lot. Great concept, decent fx and execution. I would say best story in the competition so far. Good luck.
  Axiles (17 January 2019, 15:26)    
11 min??? omg
но блин мне понравилось!!!! :rules:
  Kawai ishi (17 January 2019, 15:11)     
Favorite genre.Good music. Perfect! Rarely take cyberpunk, it turned out great! Good luck! 10/10 :smile:
  Kroner (17 January 2019, 14:44)     
I would like to say something more about this vid. I know it has some problems behind it (sources, quality, for lots of you probably the music) but I'm asking you to look it with a different approach since my very first purpose was to match a movie with an amv. I'm not asking to change your evaluation method for this one ofc, just to change your point of view for a second and try to be involved by the plot. Hope story is both easy to follow, but still with something more to ask yourself, as I hope some voices I synthesized were good enough. As for the song I used it both cause I like it and cause the theme fitted really good for me, it could be more dynamic on some parts ( were I tried to compensate with sound effects), I Know this is a competition but i'm here because i want to share this with you guys, and I hope you will understand my purpose and you can enjoy the vid ^^
  Anejo (17 January 2019, 14:32)      
» okhostok:
Anyways, good luck. You did a very original video that the concept may become popular in future.

да пытались тут у нас уже некотоыре русские команды нечто подобное реализовать. И тоже на киберпанк. Но там, честно признаться, сюжет казался несколько запутанным (детектив какой-то) что без описания втянутся в просмотр было трудно.

Первое такое видео, которое смотрелось цельно, без напряга.

Хотя не отрицаю, в чем-то можно было улучшить вовлеченность)

Если подходить к жанру краткометражки с умом могут появится интересные и сильные работы, отходящие от привычных канонов AMV
  okhostok (17 January 2019, 14:17)     
Wow, 11 minutes. This is a great idea that requires a lot of effort.
However, there is nothing that holds viewer's attention in the beginning except cool effects. Beginning is very detailed. This is bad.
Anyways, good luck. You did a very original video that the concept may become popular in future. :smile:
  Anejo (17 January 2019, 14:12)      
I remember some attempts earlier to make such short films, but this one impressed me, it has clear concept and accurate execution.

Sometimes authors has muxh to say, but they are limited by timing of the song.
As I think, the video tends to be boring when it has unsutable pacing and timing of culmination, rather than the absolute timing itself.

Thus I do not think the story is too long, anyway)


I do enjoy the story and yes, I think it was worth seeing)
Nothing to add on the technics part. I like the style (colours, effects, edit

As for my vision, I would probably change the audio (you know)) to suit action part (escaping of replicant-girl).

And, on the one hand, commom looks are important to make sources work together, but on the other hand some change in colours and atmo would be better in terms of such long video, it would make it more involving
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