The font selections (0:00,0:36,1:40) and the grading feels rather cheap at parts, and some compositions feel uneasy to watch (2:09, 2:16) most probably because of the confusing camera movements. Tho despite it's flaws the atmosphere is actually spot on, especailly 1:21-1:26 with the dog barking sound too, overall turned out surprisingly enjoyable. Also I was actually kind of a fan of the distortions you introduced to the video, a nice touch to sync and storytelling. 6/10
Some comps here looks heavier and better than any stuff those "critics" made themselves, so dont bother taking their opinion too close, because i doubt they would rank their own amvs with 1/10.
The fact that you put a lot of effort there worth a praise alone. Awesome concept as well. But still, you need to work better with CC to make the comps better. Like the scene in 0:52: building looks not blended at all. There was a few easy options to fix it: CC or make them more blured, or...both of them. Comps with artificial black eyes looks too cheap compared to the rest of the video. I know it was hard to compose it, but then...you either make it decent, either dont try it at all (thats just my opinion though). Actually, i think that the only thing that bugs me too much is that how you compose dark/black colors with the rest of the frame. Its just... wont work like that.
Nevertheless, awesome job. I ddnt expect someone to tryhard so much for Akross this year.
That was cool. But the story is not comprehensible to be honest, this amv is more about visuals than storytelling. Anyways, GJ - cool effects. P.S. Saw your channel, will wait for Forest Style AMV in the future, I really liked it. )
Хорошая попытка, много работы видно, но проблема в том, что её видно ) Сильно инородно выглядит практически вся графика даже в превью. Рендер в титрах тоже грубоватый. В принципе хорошее начало, но есть над чем работать.