 | [16.11.2014] flaffi » Blue Steel Fleet [Elixir] | | Чо-т какой-то не экшоновый экшон... не знаю... у меня восприятие такое было, диссонанс музыки с видео... |
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 | [16.11.2014] Elixir » Blue Steel Fleet [Elixir] | :
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| AnimeFanaticBoy @ 16 November 2014, 17:21 | -Not sure if this could be exactly an Action. It kind of feels weak. But as a drama, good one.
-It has some nice scenes in it. While not enough for an action, it still has its moments.
-The ending was a bit confusing and the lip flap you have before the credits it-s a no. You could have fixed that
-the video and music go in a same way, so we're fine there.
-you need to improve the zooms next time, some of them needed to be smoother |
Thank you, |
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 | [16.11.2014] Maniaki » Moon Powder [mastamind] | despite everything it was pretty fun!~ good job
Spoiler: the beginning scared me since it looked extremely like one of my projects o.o
Good luck o.= |
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 | [16.11.2014] AnimeFanaticBoy » Blue Steel Fleet [Elixir] | Since you nicely asked for it, then here we go:
-Not sure if this could be exactly an Action. It kind of feels weak. But as a drama, good one.
-It has some nice scenes in it. While not enough for an action, it still has its moments.
-The ending was a bit confusing and the lip flap you have before the credits it-s a no. You could have fixed that
-the video and music go in a same way, so we're fine there.
-you need to improve the zooms next time, some of them needed to be smoother
And from my part that's all. Not bad |
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 | [16.11.2014] Armed » Blue Steel Fleet [Elixir] | | This is a good selection of music and videos. The performance is not good enough technically, but i like the AMV. |
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 | [16.11.2014] NewOvermind » Blue Steel Fleet [Elixir] | | Сорс хороший выбрал для клипа, но сам клип длинноватым вышел) Ну и обыгрышь не везде понравился. Хотя с 3 минуты доставило. |
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| [16.11.2014] Elixir » Blue Steel Fleet [Elixir] | I am terribly sorry if you see that my "commentary" for this video is rather long.
It's due to my habit of rambling on and on about something.
I would love to hear comments from others who have more experience than I do. |
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 | [16.11.2014] Kib » Face of Madness [SpiritiX] | Ой, зря ты взял этот трек, так как у многих будут ассоциации с оригиналом, да и, как и овер, тоже где то на ютубе уже видел такое м/в.
Кстати с 1:13 и до 1:22 почему глаза не доделал (я имею ввиду что спираль не вращается, а прыгает из стороны в сторону) или это какая то странная попытка посинсхрить?)
Я понимаю, ты в этом куске липсинк делал, но маску можно же было запилить)
Ну а в целом вроде бы неплохо…но, повторюсь, зря ты взял этот трек. |
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