 | [04.12.2016] Mr.Memory » Another story of Another [Mr.Memory] | Zebiru
I believe attempting to achieve something is better than doing nothing. I can't change your point of view, but I can certainly change my way of making videos. |
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| [04.12.2016] Mr.Memory » Another story of Another [Mr.Memory] | maple leaf
Thanks for the approval! Most of the color tones was made by using solid layers and adjustment layers in After Effects. Changing the main tones was a creation I came up in mind at the start of making this video. I think the final result wasn't too bad, but it can absolutely be refined more. In future projects, I'll make the tones more unified. After I have gathered enough experiences I'll try my creations again.  |
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 | [04.12.2016] maple leaf » Another story of Another [Mr.Memory] | I can definitely see the author's effort from the AMV, and generally this is quite nice, the flow of the story is okay although those FX and the choice of color tone could be refined better.
Well done and wish you good luck in the contest.  |
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| [04.12.2016] Mr.Memory » The Fall: Friends Forever [S†eelshine] | | Wow! It has been seven years since you released your last video! I think the video was absolutely beautiful! I love the colors and the song! The size of the credits can be enlarged more. Overall, this is great work! I love it! (*˘︶˘*)*♡ |
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| [04.12.2016] Mr.Memory » Lonely Honor [NanaMi] | | The editing was absolutely beautiful! I can see you put a lot of effort at the credits part and it improved a lot comparing with the previous version you sent me. The story was great, though it did look like action. No doubt that this is a great start, there is still a lot for both of us to improve.加油！ |
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| [04.12.2016] Mr.Memory » Another story of Another [Mr.Memory] | MrNosec
Thanks for taking your time to read my commentary and comments! I’m moved to see someone evaluate my video so detailed. That image you posted was intentional to work as a transition. During the making of the video I applied different input frame rate values for individual scenes to get the smoothest effect. The final result wasn’t as good as I expected. Some editors and friends suggested me to delete this effect and just use the original speed of footages, but I still insisted on using twixtor to make the footages slow and smooth to fit with the music. (◦˙▽˙◦) |
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 | [04.12.2016] MrNosec » Another story of Another [Mr.Memory] | Although teen-drama-crossovers are starting to get a little stale at this point, as I personally felt a sense of deja vu throughout the whole video, I can clearly tell that quite alot of effort was put into this and that is indeed praiseworthy.
I don't think this video benefited from the use of motion interpolation at all, as most scenes don't justify it's use and the interpolation artifacts are very distracting, deleting the repeated frames OR setting the correct input frame rate for twixtor (usually 23,976/2 or 23,976/3 but it could vary even in the same scene) should do the trick and avoid the constant stuttering.
Also consider not using interpolation over a segment where scenes change or this (the gif below) happens (this could have been intentional to work as a transition..?)
Yes some effects feel overdone and uncalled for, this isn't a bad video but it's not great either, I suspect you have tons of potential but I just can't judge it properly because I find it hard to enjoy, maybe due to my personal preferences. But as you said in previous replies, " More will be improved in the future! ", so good luck in the contest and on future projects.
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| [04.12.2016] Mr.Memory » Another story of Another [Mr.Memory] | Axiles
Thanks! More will be improved in the future!
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frosta
Yeah, Idid notice the blur effects was kind of overused in the first minute of the video. The making of the clock scenes did took a lot of time. They were made by only using shape layers in After Effects. My project files were destroyed in the middle of making the clock sceen because of power failure. It took a whole week for me to remake the clock sceen. But this final version added a lot more details than the one before. Thanks for liking it!
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hnscby6
Hi PikaPika! It’s great to see you in the comments section.我觉得特效用的多余这一评论不太恰当，不如说我的特效没能与剪辑很好的磨合在一起。作为首次比赛我自己还挺满足的。前面的补帧特效有的作者赞成有的作者反对。我自己思考很久后还是决定使用这一特效来契合前期舒缓的背景音乐。后面的一些静止系分镜以及时钟特效是为了与作品照应才做的。时钟分镜花费的时间精力较多。最后时钟倒转并破碎一方面与回忆片段对应，另一方面象征男女主的关系的彻底破碎。但总之非常感谢你的评论！以后还会做下去，参加更多比赛，当然也会不断进步的。Thanks! |
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 | [04.12.2016] frosta » Another story of Another [Mr.Memory] | ouahhhh ..... very nice amv ! I really appreciated it really for me it was a good amv because it told a clear story and you handled very good in your scene selection and the overall synchronisaton with the music and the after effects effects like the clock was just very good....
BUT some effects were in my opinion overused....
Credits were awesome but a little english subtitle would had been appreciated but really alll in all very good
You rox and keep it up ! good luck in the contest and i hope to see you in the finals! |
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| [04.12.2016] Mr.Memory » Another story of Another [Mr.Memory] | The story was originally planned to tell the audience that the girl with red pony tails was furious about the boy cheating on her, who set the fire and lead to a series of explosions. But I must have failed to send this information to you because few of my friends who watched this didn’t know why things suddenly start to explode. Hope you like the other parts, and please leave comments below to point out the parts that can be improved.
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DirtyLoli
Thanks! There is still a lot more to improve! I will put more effort in the future videos! |
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