Please, correct genre as school romance. No comedy :) Though i didn't watched original and don't watching such stuff anymore :) I liked dynamic and energy of clip, symbios of music and video too :) Well done! Good luck.
Perhaps the song's theme is a dark side of love. And the anime that you used is a romantic comedy. I was so confused. I couldn't understand your intention. If you had chosen another song, your AMV would have been good. Good luck!
If you had chosen another song, your AMV would have been good. Good luck!