How two broken heart, get gradually hot. This is a story about meeting. I have not do a AMV seriously for a long time, either to take part in AkrossCon. I made this because it is special for someone. The original inspiration is from my favorite editor goЯz's my favorite AMV "fracture". To be honest, there are many scenes I'm not satisfied, but I have no more time. Anyway, please enjoy it~
27.12.2019
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Various[ Cowboy Bebop, Space Dandy, Love, Death & Robots ]
Radical Dream thank u very much for your comments. It's valuable. I noticed some points you mentioned, I also want to fix these bugs, but I'm eager to finish it. Maybe I will revise some scenes after this contest. Lastly, thanks again!
I really appreciate the mood here, song fit perfectly with your idea and it drives in a sort of dreamy space, really really a nice pick.
But.... DUDE!!!!! why that aspect rateo? and why did you add space dandy? it was totally senseless for a lot of reasons and it totally distract me from the rest without any need. Also some comps look not so good but that's something more understandable, previous points were totally unnecessary
The vibe is great. And i enjoyed it a lot in overall.
First of all, that square doesn't look nice to me, even though you made it on purpose. It's too raw and simple. You could use some dirty lens with vignette and smoother corners, so it would boost that old sci-fi vibe. Maybe even some neon stuff on the background.
Defocus/blurs in space. Well, maybe i'm too nit-picking but it looks so artificial, out of place and "editinglike", because not a single camera in space uses defocus. Though it's just a little remark, that wont affect my overall rating.
Technically not bad, but no good either. The comps are too "artificial" and noticeable. It lacks something catchy, something to remember (except the comps, that aint good enough). 2:20 - 2:28, these scenes just ruined the mood. You placed static frames in the climax part of the song, and i understand that you used dissolve to compensate it, but well...it didn't work for me.
I highly respect your anime choice and the mood you created, but this amv just lacks something to remember it for, probably because of nothing special in fx. That's just my opinion though. Good luck in the contest!
thank u very much for your comments. It's valuable. I noticed some points you mentioned, I also want to fix these bugs, but I'm eager to finish it. Maybe I will revise some scenes after this contest. Lastly, thanks again!
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Kroner
hhhhh, it's just because I love dandy
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crash88ctamv
NIGHT
thx~
01:07-01:10 - фрагмент из Space Dandy слишком выделяется.
Остальное неплохо, смотрится.
But....
DUDE!!!!! why that aspect rateo? and why did you add space dandy? it was totally senseless for a lot of reasons and it totally distract me from the rest without any need. Also some comps look not so
First of all, that square doesn't look nice to me, even though you made it on purpose. It's too raw and simple. You could use some dirty lens with vignette and smoother corners, so it would boost that old sci-fi vibe. Maybe even some neon stuff on the background.
Defocus/blurs in space. Well, maybe i'm too nit-picking but it looks so artificial, out of place and "editinglike", because not a single camera in space uses defocus. Though it's just a little remark, that wont affect my overall rating.
Technically not bad, but no good either. The comps are too "artificial" and noticeable.
It lacks something catchy, something to remember (except the comps, that aint good enough).
2:20 - 2:28, these scenes just ruined the mood. You placed static frames in the climax part of the song, and i understand that you used dissolve to compensate it, but well...it didn't work for me.
I highly respect your anime choice and the mood you created, but this amv just lacks something to remember it for, probably because of nothing special in fx. That's just my opinion though.
Good luck in the contest!
thx, uncle wolf~, I also like yours.
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Encruzio
dumtumdum
Fynjy
thx for your comment
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AnimeFanaticBoy
Yes. Perhaps I have waste this potential. But thank you
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