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TForceProduction  [ TForceProduction ]
Cologne, Germany
AKROSS CON 2020
FINALIST
WINNER
It's my first time that I try a contest. It is really interesting to see my improvment in the last 10 months. This is my first own written story I tryed to create.
This Video represents our society that we are co-existing with our Smartphone and without that our world will dissapear.
 16.01.2021  
Video    Various [ Hyouka, Your Name, SSSS.Gridman, Zankyou no Terror, The Garden of Words, Sword Art Online, K, Noragami, The God of Highschool, Psycho-Pass, Tamako Love Story, Tokyo Ghoul, Naruto, Hello World, The Wind Rises, Persona 5, My Hero Academia, 5 Centimeters per Second ]
Audio    Kaskade ft. Ilsey - Disarm You (Illenium Remix)
Genre    Romance, Drama
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4:18 | 124 Mb. | 1920x1080 | H.264 / aac
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4:18 | 144 Mb. | 1920x1080 | H.264 / aac
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Total comments: 27 « 1 [2] 3 »
NIGHT  [ 25 January 2021, 16:59 ]
Very nice video :smile:

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The contest logo of the at 02:41 is not needed, it does not look at all.
(and there were already two logos - at 00:00 and just excellent at 01:40)
Also, there are logos at the end of the video, at 04:06 - and it turns out that the very first one (00:00) is not needed.

At 02:00, the girl looks at the virtual screen with closed eyes.
At 03:02 - to be honest, it's hard for me to imagine what could give such a shadow on the face on the right (light / shadow / light)
Shaoran  [ 24 January 2021, 00:14 ]
Много технической работы проделано, клип несколько затянут и начинаешь из-за этого замечать недоработки. 7,5/10
lajt  [ 22 January 2021, 13:31 ]
круто придумано, визуально сделано просто на 10 баллов, но для меня тоже слегка затянуто показалось, для 1 раза на конкурсе это супер конечно,удачи автору,надеюсь на эпики в будущем. 8/10.
MetL storm  [ 20 January 2021, 22:02 ]
Определенно сильная работа. Чего то, мне лично, не хватило для высших баллов. Визуал имеет не ровности и как уже замечали, графика слишком бросается в глаза. Возможно я не уловил подходящего настроения. В любом случае, это очень круто, такого мало, очень надеюсь увидеть, что автор придумает в следующих работах.
Лисёнок-тян  [ 19 January 2021, 15:59 ]
хорошая работа и техника исполнения, но немного затянуто
Radical Dream  [ 19 January 2021, 12:33 ]
Some comps here looks heavier and better than any stuff those "critics" made themselves, so dont bother taking their opinion too close, because i doubt they would rank their own amvs with 1/10.

The fact that you put a lot of effort there worth a praise alone. Awesome concept as well.
But still, you need to work better with CC to make the comps better. Like the scene in 0:52:
building looks not blended at all. There was a few easy options to fix it: CC or make them more blured, or...both of them.
Comps with artificial black eyes looks too cheap compared to the rest of the video. I know it was hard to compose it, but then...you either make it decent, either dont try it at all (thats just my opinion though).
Actually, i think that the only thing that bugs me too much is that how you compose dark/black colors with the rest of the frame. Its just... wont work like that.

Nevertheless, awesome job. I ddnt expect someone to tryhard so much for Akross this year.
okhostok  [ 19 January 2021, 07:16 ]
That was cool. But the story is not comprehensible to be honest, this amv is more about visuals than storytelling. Anyways, GJ - cool effects.
P.S. Saw your channel, will wait for Forest Style AMV in the future, I really liked it. )
ADMIRAL  [ 18 January 2021, 06:55 ]
Don't take shit from anyone your video is great I really enjoyed it.
Bea$t  [ 17 January 2021, 13:27 ]
Хорошая попытка, много работы видно, но проблема в том, что её видно ) Сильно инородно выглядит практически вся графика даже в превью. Рендер в титрах тоже грубоватый. В принципе хорошее начало, но есть над чем работать.
LionAmv  [ 16 January 2021, 22:55 ]
i like the concept idea of the video, sadly in my opinion, the scene selection, compositing, vfx and song election doesn't quite make it. i can apreciate that it has a lot of work on it, being this the first time that you participated i would say that the video let me quite impressed, I will be looking forward to you nexts projects!
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