Hi everyone, this is my solo entry with a song I wanted to edit since its release, and now I finally did it, with a spicy anime ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) I hope you will enjoy, thanks for your time :'3 and Happy Halloween!
Leberate Thanks Bean430 Thanks a lot for your helpful feedback, I just think sometimes I don't need to follow the lyrics letter by letter, I preferred to focus on vibes and "metaphors", but I see what you mean.
ok the beginning in the first half of the first verse perfection. granted even there (though it worked unlike elsewhere) it's suffers from not having a concepts decided. by the second verse there was not enough Halloween action type of scenes or a romantic build up to fit either anymore. some of the scene story is it not really flow with a few not even having transitions and missing direction not really going with the lyrics even. (I think you missed a really good opportunity for "fall with your knees" for this type of combo as getting that line right single-handedly could have helped tie both of those concepts together) I feel like if you mixed some other sources in it would have worked better particularly for verse 2.
re-watching this from the beginning of the second verse it becomes obvious that you just viewed the second for and forgot to combine it with the first verse. easy mistake you do not wanna watch the whole video each time but it is what it is. You did a decent job at the end. you are getting a decent score though from me.
Bean430 Thanks a lot for your helpful feedback, I just think sometimes I don't need to follow the lyrics letter by letter, I preferred to focus on vibes and "metaphors", but I see what you mean.
re-watching this from the beginning of the second verse it becomes obvious that you just viewed the second for and forgot to combine it with the first verse. easy mistake you do not wanna watch the whole video each time but it is what it is. You did a decent job at the end. you are getting a decent score though from me.
Thanks! c:
Thanks :'3
Grazie xD
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