I liked the story the relationship development. the black and white worked for me. there were a few spots where the characters did not quite match the background and a few bits where it just felt like shots of girls looking at each other, but most of it was pretty solid for me. I loved the ending too +A+
Editing and story composition are quite good, but I don't like the black & white style though, I kept on waiting for the climax moment, which I expect the scene will switch back from grayscale into full color, but it never came until the very last moment.
Anyways, I enjoyed your work. Good luck in the contest.
Anyways, I enjoyed your work.
Good luck in the contest.