I think this concept needed some more development to be clearer, editing isn't bad as it's simple and clean but I think I can't truly understand the story or idea you wanted to tell
Сам бегать решил. Стать великим спортсменом. В инвариантности -сила. Как минимум удачная попытка в визуализацию. Звуки подходят под капли дождя. И в конце автор как-бы обыграл туман. Неплохо было бы, если бы не до ужаса резкий монтаж даже там, где это было не совсем в тему. К местам с репитами нареканий нет
I heard this intro sound just recently in some game and it drives me insane because I just can't remember where exactly is it from.
And as for the clip I thing it looked much better in the authors head. The concept seems to be great but I think there are a lot of missed opportunities with this particular music/video combo. As others have mentioned, the inclusion of ambient sounds like that of running water or a steaming iron would have helped with the atmosphere. Also, a lot of miscellaneous beats and beeps in the track are ignored and those could have been also used to great effect to spice things up and surprise the viewer. Looking forward to your next clip man and good luck.
развития сюжета не замечено
действительно не хватает звуков действий
бессмысленно затянутые финальные титры
Ругать точно не хочу, но и особо похвалить не знаю за что.
Сам бегать решил. Стать великим спортсменом. В инвариантности -сила.
Как минимум удачная попытка в визуализацию. Звуки подходят под капли дождя.
Неплохо было бы, если бы не до ужаса резкий монтаж даже там, где это было не совсем в тему. К местам с репитами
And as for the clip I thing it looked much better in the authors head. The concept seems to be great but I think there are a lot of missed opportunities with this particular music/video combo. As others have mentioned, the inclusion of ambient sounds like that of running water or a steaming iron would have helped with the atmosphere. Also, a lot of miscellaneous beats and beeps in the track are ignored and those could have been also used to great effect to spice things up and surprise the viewer. Looking forward to your next clip man and good luck.